walking through a street of loneliness
cold breeze kisses my face
frustrations hovers the deep sigh
long to see your face
just one glimpse of your shadow
enough to ignite the passion
of a long lost love
whew it's just a dream!
the waves of the sea splashes
the coldness of a dying heart
my eyes looking to and fro
waiting for someone but nothing to be found
as i look at my reflection
upon the rushing water
i noticed a heat flows my face
can't hold back the tears
as i look at my reflection
upon the rushing water
i noticed a heat flows my face
can't hold back the tears
one day, when suddenly our eyes met...
i can't move, my heart beats so fast
i want to speak out but other words coming out...
BYE-BYE FRIEND!
nice poem..write more..
ReplyDeleteWow.I am moved.I felt the intense feeling.
ReplyDeleteminyo na per.
ReplyDeletenice :)
ReplyDeleteFinally, A poem with such lush of word usage... I loved it.
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem! I hope you would make more.
ReplyDeleteGod bless.
Very nice poem!
ReplyDeleteParang na-sad ako bigla just reading through the meaning of your poem...
ReplyDeletehmmmmm.... loving in silence?
ReplyDeletei love it!
ReplyDeletethe hidden meaning of your poem is expressed out of your soul...
i hope i can share one of mine to you.
you can peep into my site anytime.
Aww...sad. I can relate to this.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing because you are a gifted poet.
nakaka sad naman:-( Btw very nice poem! Intense and emotion!
ReplyDeletea DKI poem.^^. you gotta tell her, dude so she may know.
ReplyDelete:( kakalungkot naman!
ReplyDeletebreathless for a moment
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