Wednesday, August 10, 2011

ALMOST I LOVE YOU (a poem)

walking through a street of loneliness
 cold breeze kisses my face
frustrations hovers the  deep sigh
long to see your face

just one glimpse of your shadow
enough to ignite the passion
of a long lost love
whew it's just a dream!

the waves of the sea splashes
the coldness of a dying heart
my eyes looking to and fro
waiting for someone but nothing to be found

as i look at my reflection
upon the rushing water
i noticed a heat flows my face
can't hold back the tears

one day, when suddenly our eyes met...
i can't move, my heart beats so fast
i want to speak out but other words coming out...
BYE-BYE FRIEND!

15 comments:

  1. Wow.I am moved.I felt the intense feeling.

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  2. Finally, A poem with such lush of word usage... I loved it.

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  3. Awesome poem! I hope you would make more.
    God bless.

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  4. Parang na-sad ako bigla just reading through the meaning of your poem...

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  5. hmmmmm.... loving in silence?

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  6. i love it!
    the hidden meaning of your poem is expressed out of your soul...
    i hope i can share one of mine to you.
    you can peep into my site anytime.

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  7. Aww...sad. I can relate to this.

    Keep writing because you are a gifted poet.

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  8. nakaka sad naman:-( Btw very nice poem! Intense and emotion!

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  9. a DKI poem.^^. you gotta tell her, dude so she may know.

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